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Salon de The by Rssfim

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I absolutely love this painting! The detail is beautiful especially in the buildings. You did a great job on the texture on the buildings, signs and people. The one thing that I see though is that it almost feels like there's a little too much going on in the patio with all the chairs and people. The detail needs definition and to look a little bit clearer and even but still not bad. You did a great job on the shading everywhere else. You created a lot of nice harmony with the colors. Well, this is my first critique! I hope it helped! Keep up the great work! :)
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Rssfim Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for your comment!
I always try to improve my work and your opinion is not only welcome but also very important.
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dharmaghost Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I felt like you deserved it! You are on the right track if you are always seeking improvement! I know how important feed back is. Isn't that why we're all here? ;P
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